There´s almost no development in comparison to your former movies. You still use the same effects, cutting, panning/cropping and color correcting.
Even the concept doesn´t fit. In the 1st half you tell a story with epic classical music and in the 2nd half you show standard PvP with modern rock music. That breaks the atmosphere.
Your english has improved a bit but still it´s not that good. There is no flow in your sentences. The words you chose are basically correct but they´re used the wrong way.
All in all a quite poor movie. I expected more from you, tbh.
I suggest, you collect ideas before starting a new project. Having no ideas will alway lead to results like this. You also should pay more attention to cut, color, pan&crop, speed, music and sync than on effects. Effects mainly are thought as support - not as main feature.
Wir müssen [...] der Versuchung widerstehen, ein Geflecht von Gesetzen herzustellen, hinter dem eines Tages die Freiheit unsichtbar wird. - Helmut Schmidt[/size]