You had some good ideas here, nice.
But that was way too mich camera shake in this movie. And you should train cutting and masking more. This wasn't accurate.
You also had some good spots in there put the camera was too far away to emphasize them. You could get much more out of that.
Pruductions? o_O
And what the heck is that Vegas Screen for? It says nothing about your skill in movie making and creating effects.
Wir müssen [...] der Versuchung widerstehen, ein Geflecht von Gesetzen herzustellen, hinter dem eines Tages die Freiheit unsichtbar wird. - Helmut Schmidt[/size]